One, that pesky, mischief Squirrelpaw followed me, and refused to leave. Two, I can't believe i couldn't catch her scent. Mouse dung! I let a apprentice follow me without me noticing. And the third, I met the other cats, Feathertail, Stormfur (accompanies Feathertail), Tawnypelt, and Crowpaw. We waited at the fourtrees for signs from Star clan, but NOTHING! I am pretty depressed. We plan to meet again, and after we dispersed, all the way back to the camp Squirrelpaw begged me to let her go to the next meeting. I thought about it and I told her yes, for I feared that she will tell some cats. You see how Squirrelpaw can be really annoying? Well anyways, It's been a long night. And I'm tired, maybe tomorrow will be a more cheerful day.
GOOD NIGHT
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