I had a dream last night, it's weird, maybe it's because I ate too much. In my dream I met the former leader of Thunder clan, Bluestar. She said that the forest will be in danger and I will meet 3 other cats at new moon. As I said, I think its just a dream. Why would Star clan pick a inexperienced cat like me? Why not Firestar? Anyways, today is a full moon! Which means today is gathering. You get to meet cats from different clans in a place, each full moon is a truce day, so we don't fight there. I need to go.
I'm back from the gathering. This is making me have determination, but fear at the same time. I just came back from the gathering. I met Tawnypelt, my sister there. She told me about a dream, really similar to mine! Now I feel determined to fulfill the problem. It's just that, what do I do? Where do I go? I just earned my loyalty and trust to the clan, if I go sneaking off, will I have to prove my loyalty and trust to my clan?
Star clan help me.
I liked how you used action sentences and structure to capture the reader's attention. Great job! one thing I noticed is that your intro could be better, I know it. It did capture my attention, and have the conclusion, body, and intro. however, there could be more of the "body" and "intro". write some more! I'm sure you'll be good at writing blogs.
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