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Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Boundary Trespassers

Today, finally there were some tooth and claws, but I'm furious! River clan, once again making excuses to cross borders! Unluckily for River clan to come when the patrol that I was in saw them trying to take land. We Owned OUCH, them. Sorry, I have some scars, but it was worth it to have seen them run away like kits. OUCH. When we were there, patrolling the border, we saw Lepordfur, with the River clan deputy, and some other cats swimming to Sunning Rocks. They say that Sunning Rocks was rightfully theirs. This happened before, when Firestar, our leader just joined Thunder clan. OUCH!

We said, that this is our land, and they'll have to fight for it. They started coming closer, until they touched the land. We flailed at them, and started clawing each other. One she-cat tried leaping on top of Mousefur, but I tackled her down. She started to claw at me, I yowled of pain when she clawed my leg and ear, but I fought back. I clawed upward while she was parrying my blows there I gave a bite that she would never forget, right on the leg. She ran away, with blood trailing.

Ashfur was a pro. My best friend jumped on top of a cat, and muffled with furs in his mouth to take a hard blow on the side. I did as he said, and he was blown to the river and limped back. In the middle Thornpaw went to camp to get help. Graystripe, the deputy of Thunder clan came with other Thunder clan warrior and leaped out of the bush and started backing us up.

All of River clan retreated. We triumphed our victory and got our injuries mended. Hopefully River clan learn their lesson, but if they didn’t I won’t think twice before attacking. Oh no, I better rest, Cinderpelt’s coming and she will scold at me if she sees me awake.

Good night

2 comments:

  1. This really captured my attention, with IM FURIOUS! And this post did follow the intro, body, and conclusion. I really liked the part where there was a little fighting.. This is great... I dont think you need to change anything... Maybe, you can make a bigger fight :)

    -Brian

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  2. This intro really grabbed my attention. And like the word like Ouch or like those kind of word made me feel that im in the story.

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